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DarkRaven365 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
@03:36Amazing work. Should be a full length movie!
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xXHollowLittleSoulXx Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
@07:50holy shit.... this is AWESOME!!!
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xLiefx Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
@07:36I agree with floyd-freak. There were a lot of axis jumps in the beginning which stirred up some confusion. It's okay if that was the feeling you were going for. In the room with the phone, there were 1 or 2 jumps which made me feel uneasy so I think it works in that case.

I found the sudden change in colour to be a tad jarring. My first assumption was that a lot of time had passed. I think the reason for that was because it changed when she was still in the forest. Try making the change when she enters the creepy room and see how that looks. Stylistically, I like the choices made in colour to help tell the story. Reality (bright an vibrant), and the unsettling afterlife (blue and gloomy).

Compositionally, most of it is pretty good. I like a few of the forest shots in the beginning. The pans were a little "jumpy".

Story-wise I could follow it pretty well, except near the end... I got lost there.

The audio needs some work. The foley sounds pretty good throughout; I'm not sure about the chain-pulling at the beginning. The transitioning between music is a bit sudden and overpowers the foreground at times.

Hope that helps.
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xLiefx Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
@03:28Nice establishing shot
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Mushroom-kat Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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andyp89 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012   Photographer
@01:07The song is "forgiveness" by misen
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giosolARTE Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
@01:47very well done!!!!!!!! :D congrats!
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serendipitosity Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
@05:14Maybe it's just me, but I don't think I'd be screaming at all. I'd be freaking out, yes, and maybe screaming for help, but just screaming for the sake of screaming seems unnatural in such a situation, especially after inhaling all that smoke.
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Falling-Pixie-00 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011  Student Photographer
@08:29your welcome! :D I love your film!
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m0n4c3 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011
@07:46brilliant
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Imageless Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student Filmographer
@00:21beautiful work!!! you're really very good!!
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AntonellaB Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
@06:09strange my comment doesnt show :(
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unmatchedsock13 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011  Student
@00:46I think where you shot this scene was absolutely stunning.
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Bob-the-Rock Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
@06:55I'm twitching for some reason, and this is the third time I've watched this. The theme is really getting to me. I'M N OT GONNA BE ABLE TO SLEEP PROPERLY TONIGHT.

But I really love this. =D
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lan12tina Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011
@05:42I really love the piano in this..Can you tell me what it's called?
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lan12tina Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011
@05:30PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me the name of this piano piece! I'm so sure that i've heard it beore.. It's so nostalgic and calming..
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mumblingRain Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
@02:26The voice sounds like GLaDOS
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Kasanii Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011  Student Digital Artist
@08:30Wow i love it!
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Freeeeedom Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011
@02:57death note
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Rangamafied Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
@08:17OMGOSHHH
i got chills watching this.
Good job :)
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Black-Daemon Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
@06:19Beautiful sequence here - the music is gorgeous :heart:
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wants2draw Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Student Digital Artist
@02:19Right now my phone rung. (no joke)
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TwilightGryphin Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010  Student Artist
@01:28Not entirely sure why she burned her house down (though I know she didn't mean to kill her)
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Katetherat Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2010
@04:33I actually think on this plotline you could extend this into a full length film. Brilliant work!
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Cloud-Emillover Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2010  Student General Artist
@04:59You're welcome. :D
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DianaBathory Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010   Traditional Artist
@01:14brilliant
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Opalura Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
@08:05I definitely don't get this film. Waste of time.
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Opalura Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
@00:02What? This was well filmed non-sense. Sorry.
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faerie-stitches Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
@00:35agreement here, love it :')
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peachpit580 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010
@02:31Black Pages, whoa
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CourtneyCookie Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010   Photographer
@06:35Ah, yes i agree with ~iluvwritin
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CourtneyCookie Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010   Photographer
@05:58hahaha, my first thought would be "oh shit" if i were her
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CourtneyCookie Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010   Photographer
@05:21ooohh this is creepy :P creepy little girl
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MeEYaoX3 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010
@03:04wahhhhhh!
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moonfusion Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2010
@07:17bit creepy, scary story but well made!
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andyp89 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009   Photographer
@00:50shot on a sony vx 2100e
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jade-storm Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2009
@02:05what kid in their right mind would walk right into a creepy abandonded house??
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hinatannaruto4ever Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2009
@01:56DO NOT go searching for a ringing phone when you're out in the middle of no-where. XD

Wonderful change in lighting, can't wait to see what happens next.
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andyp89 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009   Photographer
@07:27thankyou! XD
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DancingInTwilight Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009  Student General Artist
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TheLocke Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2009
@00:14Brilliant effects with the text scroll and everything.
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Life-At-Large Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2008
@03:11You had my interest until this point. She's cute as kittens hugging but I definitely lost interest.
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inkd902 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2008
@03:57dude, this is amazing!! yo, keep it up!! =]
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xyeothiemoon Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
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FatKat Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2008
@04:14 Why would anyone speak so clearly if they were the murderer. It must be simple drama.
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joesmithjones Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2008
@03:45Interesting product placement.
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whitewave-moth Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
@04:48just wanted to put in that the use of music is totally brilliant. i wasnt guna bother watchin it all but im hooked now...
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Vengence is a phone line which rings to those who grieve.


After finding an old book lying in a creek bed, Caitlin is lead to an abandoned building with a mysterious phone ringing inside, it then becomes obvious that the tattered book she found is no ordinary book, but a directory to the dead.

But are the voices on the other line what they seem?

This was filmed for my yr12 VCE media assesment, it took about 4 months all up.


Starring.

Samantha Pearce

Kylie Hall

Ben Pearce


Music.

Matt Gates - Orchestral

Kevin Macleod - Piano Piece

Misen - 'Forgiveness' - Final song


Filmed in September 2007.
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I love this story! Very thrilling...especially that twist at the end. And the film...a truly professional work. I can't compliment it enough.The Black Pages by ~andyp89 ( Suggested by mental3pal and Featured by O-Uaglione )
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DarkRaven365 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
@03:36Amazing work. Should be a full length movie!
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AlisonWolfsbane Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
i'm confused.
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DarkRaven365 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The ending yes, is confusing. The voice of the one she had burned is telling hr over and over "They need to get what they deserve" and that she would not want. She yells "Shut up" because the voices are neverending.
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apachiart Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student General Artist
omb! did not see that coming this peice is really good
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xXHollowLittleSoulXx Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
@07:50holy shit.... this is AWESOME!!!
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xLiefx Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
@07:36I agree with floyd-freak. There were a lot of axis jumps in the beginning which stirred up some confusion. It's okay if that was the feeling you were going for. In the room with the phone, there were 1 or 2 jumps which made me feel uneasy so I think it works in that case.

I found the sudden change in colour to be a tad jarring. My first assumption was that a lot of time had passed. I think the reason for that was because it changed when she was still in the forest. Try making the change when she enters the creepy room and see how that looks. Stylistically, I like the choices made in colour to help tell the story. Reality (bright an vibrant), and the unsettling afterlife (blue and gloomy).

Compositionally, most of it is pretty good. I like a few of the forest shots in the beginning. The pans were a little "jumpy".

Story-wise I could follow it pretty well, except near the end... I got lost there.

The audio needs some work. The foley sounds pretty good throughout; I'm not sure about the chain-pulling at the beginning. The transitioning between music is a bit sudden and overpowers the foreground at times.

Hope that helps.
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xLiefx Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
@03:28Nice establishing shot
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floyd-freak Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Filmographer
@07:35The story was good, but the cinematography during the beginning and the end was so chaotic, it was really hard to concentrate on anything that was going on without feeling sick. It was a bit upsetting since the story seemed so interesting.
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Mushroom-kat Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
@04:27I love how you gave the girl a little innocence here, she didn't really think that Hillary was in the house so she didn't really mean to hurt her right?
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andyp89 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012   Photographer
@04:27That's correct she didn't realise Hillary was in the house. Thanks for your feedback :)
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Mushroom-kat Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
@04:27alright, i was just making sure, I love this film sooooo much!
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andyp89 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012   Photographer
@04:27Thanks so much :)
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Mushroom-kat Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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Crossroad-Demon Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
@01:07What the song during this scene?
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andyp89 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012   Photographer
@01:07The song is "forgiveness" by misen
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giosolARTE Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
@01:47very well done!!!!!!!! :D congrats!
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serendipitosity Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
@05:14Maybe it's just me, but I don't think I'd be screaming at all. I'd be freaking out, yes, and maybe screaming for help, but just screaming for the sake of screaming seems unnatural in such a situation, especially after inhaling all that smoke.
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desires12 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012  Student General Artist
WoW liked it much....................
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Falling-Pixie-00 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Student Photographer
@08:29Wow. Everything about that was just... breathtaking. The cinematography, shots, casting/acting, music... ♥ I can't love this enough! It's extremely inspiring to me!!!
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andyp89 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011   Photographer
@08:29Thanks for all your good words and feedback on my films, I really appreciate it :)
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Falling-Pixie-00 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011  Student Photographer
@08:29your welcome! :D I love your film!
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AnnieBarbaro Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Freakin awesoooooome x)
love the story line, love the settings, love the music, love the effects, just love it all!!!
Congrats :)
btw: the girl's a really good actress
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andyp89 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011   Photographer
Thanks for the good words :)
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AnnieBarbaro Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome x)
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m0n4c3 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011
@07:46brilliant
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hummingbird96 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is my favourite of yours amazing job!!!!
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Branstock Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011   Filmographer
@07:42IMO The best part is the shot with the little girl running, mountains in the background.
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Imageless Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student Filmographer
@00:21beautiful work!!! you're really very good!!
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Jessanator Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
@08:29Amazing film, I think the music choices where brilliant too but I don't get the ending. I feel like I am the only one :'( I mean I get that it's a directory to the dead but I don't get why they where all saying the same thing and why she set fire to the house even if she thought no one was in it. Sorry this comment is years after the film was done but I really had to ask...
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AntonellaB Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
@06:09This is absolutely amazing, I love the way her hair and dress moves in the wind, the music! Very inspiring!
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AntonellaB Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
@06:09strange my comment doesnt show :(
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unmatchedsock13 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011  Student
@00:46I think where you shot this scene was absolutely stunning.
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Bob-the-Rock Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
@06:55I'm twitching for some reason, and this is the third time I've watched this. The theme is really getting to me. I'M N OT GONNA BE ABLE TO SLEEP PROPERLY TONIGHT.

But I really love this. =D
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Bob-the-Rock Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
@05:15I feel as if the scream was a bit short. I reckon it would've been better if it kind of faded away into....something. I hope you actually understand what I mean. And the music that starts afterwards is a bit out of place. other than that. AWESOMELY MADE MOVIE!!! I could easily imagine this being extended and becoming a full-length movie!
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lan12tina Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011
@05:42I really love the piano in this..Can you tell me what it's called?
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lan12tina Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011
@05:30PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me the name of this piano piece! I'm so sure that i've heard it beore.. It's so nostalgic and calming..
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mumblingRain Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
@02:26The voice sounds like GLaDOS
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mumblingRain Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
@01:44NOW it's getting scary
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Nahcima Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011
So at the end did she realize that she was the murderer and the voices on the other line were telling her what to do??
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Kasanii Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011  Student Digital Artist
@08:30Wow i love it!
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just1ofamillion Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011  Student Writer
This was simply amazing. I wasn't prepared at all for the ending- and the whole voice over at the beginning just set the mood perfectly. Overall, I think the music and setting were really gorgeous and also help to add suspense and fear.
Love from,
Charlie
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miontre Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
@07:40I like it! But don't understand it, does anyone care to explain? :)
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lexigirl1aal Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011
The scenes were beautifully done... can someone please explain to me both why she set the house aflame (revenge? if so, then why was she upset that the woman had died?) and whether or not the book was, in fact, a hoax?

I would greatly appreciate the explanation ^-^
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Naomeart Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
@08:27Wow this is brilliant! X
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Freeeeedom Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011
@02:57death note
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peterthy2 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011
Really cool film. It is wonderful visualy, the only thing I had a problem with was the sound. It seemed like you could have done a bit better in that respect but over all a very impresive piece.
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Rangamafied Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
@08:17OMGOSHHH
i got chills watching this.
Good job :)
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Mew-Mew-Haraku Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
@08:27I dont quite understand what was with the people on the phone....they wanted revenge on what? Can you clarify please I love it but im bad at understanding!
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Yrosasion Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011
@07:53just... amazing<3
the story is a kind of original (not the phone, not the book, they are not original, but brin this 2 together, that's... just amazing)

you have my love for your video's<3
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Black-Daemon Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
@06:19Beautiful sequence here - the music is gorgeous :heart:
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